Whew, we sure have a few bugs to work out here, don’t we? Thanks to everyone who have told us that there were a few more things to work on. We really, really appreciate the feedback, so please keep it coming!
I could not figure out which direction I was going on this comic, so a lot of time was spent simply staring at my paper thinking, “What the heck am I doing?” At one point, I had everyone getting up to leave the house, at another point, I had everyone simply repeating what was said on the previous comic. I wish that everyone could see my sketch book, because I have lots of stuff crossed out. Hence the reason why this is only a two panel comic.J When I finally decided on what was going on, I did not even do a rough drawing in my sketch book. I went straight to my paper and began to draw. I am particularly pleased with how Purplefire and Indigo are still finishing up their lines from the previous comic in panel one. I thought that was a nice touch.
After this gets posted today and I frequent the forums, I plan on going back into my script of QFB and continue with re-writing it. I have the first four pages re-written so that’s a good start! W00t!
Have a happy weekend everyone!